charlotte117
Unconcieved Lark
Resident Redhead #2
Your words in my memory are like music to me
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Post by charlotte117 on Sept 26, 2006 22:20:56 GMT -5
Prologue Is life really as fragile as people say it is? Does it really hang from a string and can be taken from you at any moment? Well, I think "at any moment" is a bit exaggerated but yes, life is very fragile. We, as humans, are weaker than we look. We could easily break our bones or catch a deadly disease. And to make things worse, humans have made ways to make life even more vulnerable such as guns and weapons of that sort. I know this from experience. A year ago, I was shot in the lower stomach and I almost died in the process. Doctors say it was a miracle I survived. When I tell people this, their reaction is always the same. They usually gasp and say, "Oh my god, really?! How did it happen?!" I answer, "I was shot trying to save a someone's life." I say nothing else. The nosy people try and talk me into telling them the whole story. Only the people who were involved know the whole story and I would like to keep it that why thank you very much. It is not something one likes tell recount. Anyway, this isn't about the past. There is always a time in life when we must leave the past behind and look ahead. This is my time. My time to live my life to its fullest and I am not looking back.
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xxvampirexx
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Didnt you hear? Vampires ARE real.
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Post by xxvampirexx on Sept 26, 2006 22:28:44 GMT -5
This is my very demanding review. More Soon. Please and thanks.
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charlotte117
Unconcieved Lark
Resident Redhead #2
Your words in my memory are like music to me
Posts: 27
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Post by charlotte117 on Sept 26, 2006 22:39:30 GMT -5
Haha! Thanks! I'm actually still trying to write the first chapter.
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Post by Black Sakura on Sept 26, 2006 22:49:21 GMT -5
This is highly intriguing. Do go on with this.
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Post by Mr. Penguin on Sept 27, 2006 0:48:28 GMT -5
I agree with the two above me.
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Post by Black Sakura on Sept 27, 2006 0:54:18 GMT -5
Good for you. We're nice people to agree with.
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Post by Mr. Penguin on Sept 27, 2006 1:27:45 GMT -5
w00t.
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Post by Black Sakura on Sept 27, 2006 17:42:09 GMT -5
I'm glad you agree.
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charlotte117
Unconcieved Lark
Resident Redhead #2
Your words in my memory are like music to me
Posts: 27
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Post by charlotte117 on Sept 27, 2006 20:10:54 GMT -5
I'm glad you guys like it. I don't think it that great. I'm just kinda writing it...there is a point to it though....but I'm not telling what it is. I'm not sure if you would care. *shrugs*
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Post by Black Sakura on Sept 27, 2006 21:14:41 GMT -5
Well depending on what it is, we probably would care.
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Post by Mr. Penguin on Sept 28, 2006 23:45:28 GMT -5
I care! I care! Post more!
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charlotte117
Unconcieved Lark
Resident Redhead #2
Your words in my memory are like music to me
Posts: 27
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Post by charlotte117 on Sept 29, 2006 18:48:17 GMT -5
Post more of the story or the point I'm writing this?
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