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Post by Black Sakura on Sept 26, 2006 0:42:30 GMT -5
*cleans up vomit*
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Post by sarasvati on Sept 26, 2006 13:29:14 GMT -5
It's a really, really good graduation poem! My only real quibble is spelling. It's a common quibble for me. disire=desire, mirely=merely, dialouge=dialogue, loomes=looms. Spellcheck is a lovely invention. And "For some pinnacle of greater" what? What is greater modifying? Do you mean some pinnacle of greatness? I'm a wee bit confused. >.<
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hopeless
Lark Still in the Egg
don't let the butterflies blind you
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Post by hopeless on Sept 27, 2006 19:13:54 GMT -5
anchovies?
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hopeless
Lark Still in the Egg
don't let the butterflies blind you
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Post by hopeless on Sept 27, 2006 19:22:33 GMT -5
yah i know i can't spell and im typically a great advocate of spell check however i type my post in a hurry and my spell check is not working my computer is... we'll say challenged ( if im not nice it's liable to crash right here and bow for no aparent reason) oh yah and the "greater" is what every you, as the reader could think of. at the time for me it souded good. however, i suppose if you whant to analize it -it's figutive for what i desired moreof at the time like time or maybe the chance to go back and get to know the absent party mentioned in the poem, over all it was me wanting to have been more outspoken in the past.
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Post by Black Sakura on Sept 27, 2006 21:10:00 GMT -5
I hate computer crashes. >.<
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Post by Mr. Penguin on Sept 28, 2006 0:23:31 GMT -5
Computer crashes = poo.
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Post by Black Sakura on Sept 28, 2006 0:39:39 GMT -5
Exactamant.
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hopeless
Lark Still in the Egg
don't let the butterflies blind you
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Post by hopeless on Sept 30, 2006 15:32:21 GMT -5
your telling me
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Post by Mr. Penguin on Sept 30, 2006 16:09:24 GMT -5
Indeed I am.
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Post by Black Sakura on Sept 30, 2006 21:50:20 GMT -5
Ahahaha I got a new phone. And it's PINK. EWEWEWEWEW.
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hopeless
Lark Still in the Egg
don't let the butterflies blind you
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Post by hopeless on Oct 2, 2006 21:23:06 GMT -5
pink why pink?
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Post by Black Sakura on Oct 3, 2006 1:25:36 GMT -5
My dad's choice. XP Didn't even consult me.
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lia
Unconcieved Lark
Resident Redhead #1
There is a darkness deep in you, a frightening magic I cling to
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Post by lia on Nov 21, 2006 0:17:49 GMT -5
You need a phone cover Cherry. *nods* I shall get you one for Christmas!! lol
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