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Post by tam on Sept 10, 2006 17:46:39 GMT -5
I wrote this for my dad for his birthday. Thank you, Dear Father,
For being my Light
Through ups and downs,
I know we fight
But year after year
I'm Still here
So something we're doing
Must be Right. |
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Post by Black Sakura on Sept 10, 2006 17:54:09 GMT -5
WOOT for the only Virgo I know....ahha *inside joke people, ignore*
BTW I likes that.
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Post by sarasvati on Sept 11, 2006 12:06:55 GMT -5
I like it! partly because it rhymes. (I often get annoyed at poems that don't rhyme)
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Post by Black Sakura on Sept 11, 2006 18:18:08 GMT -5
Eh...don't read any of mine then...I can't rhyme for beans. XP
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Post by Mr. Penguin on Sept 21, 2006 18:45:30 GMT -5
Short and to the point. Awesome.  |
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Post by Black Sakura on Sept 21, 2006 19:10:48 GMT -5
Yup.
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