Post by Black Sakura on Sept 1, 2006 4:27:34 GMT -5
Here's the first.
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A Special Day
The spaceship was speeding ahead with all of its might. As it neared the planet, it narrowly escaped being dashed to pieces by an ungainly asteroid. The enemy was coming up ever closer to the vehicle’s starboard side. The prestigious passenger looked desperately to the pilot. “Can’t this thing go any faster?” he demanded. With a suave grin, the pilot nodded and pushed a lever. The ship twirled forward in full thrust. Now behind them, the Imperials mirrored their motion and sped ahead. A few laser-gun hits, and the pursued ship exploded, pieces of it falling into oblivion. A red phrase appeared on the screen of the TV. “Game Over!” stated the throaty voice of Darth Vader.
“Natalie! Why did you bump into me? You made me lose the game!” My ten-year-old brother Patrick had been playing a Nintendo Gamecube Star Wars game. Now he looked at me with animosity.
“Sorry!” I protested, edging out of the room.
“But you made me lose! I almost won it, and--”
I interrupted. “Patrick, It’s just a game. It’s not the end of the world.” How many times had I used this argument this week alone? Three times, four times…
“It took me a week to get to this level. Now I have to start all over!” He was in an irate mood.
“Look,” I said, desperately looking for a way to escape, “Why don’t you go yell at Teddy? I have to get ready to go.”
“Go where?”
“Remember? Oma and Opa are taking us to Rankin Ranch.” I looked at Patrick. He was clothed in nothing but pajamas, and it was noon. “You don’t look very ready yourself.” I said disgustedly. “They’ll be here any minute, and you haven’t even gotten dressed yet!”
“That’s today?” He was surprised and had evidently forgotten.
“Yeah, ask Mom.”
“Rats; I need to pack!” He was up and off the couch in a second and dashing down the hallway. I sighed and picked up my duffel bag. Did I have everything? Toothbrush, toothpaste, pajamas, hairbrush, shampoo…In the midst of my accounting, the telephone rang. With a spring, I was at it. I picked up the receiver.
“Hello?”
“Hi Natalie, this is Oma.” (Oma is what we called my mother’s mom; Opa is what we called my mother’s dad)
“Hi Oma. Are you almost here?”
“We’ll be there in half an hour or so. Is everyone ready?”
“Yeah, pretty much,” I said, hearing Patrick yelling from his room, “Mom, where did you put my socks?”
“Ok Natalie, remember that you need clothes for the whole weekend” Oma reminded me.
“Of course. See you later.”
“Bye.”
“Bye.”
I slammed the phone down and yelled, “Pat, you have to have enough things to last till Sunday!”
He replied, in a whining voice, “I know!”
I answered back to him, “Just making sure.”
Half an hour passed slowly. I was so excited to leave for the dude ranch in the High Sierras! Eventually, a horn honk sounded outside. Pat and I raced to the door and over to my grandparents’ car. We tossed our duffel bags in the trunk and got in.
Oma arrested us in our motion. “Wait; I want to go see Mommy first.” (she called my mom ‘Mommy’ because she was our mommy.) We waited patiently for ten minutes. She came back and got in again. Opa, who had turned the engine off for the ten minutes, tried to rev it up again. It would not start.
Opa used his cell phone to call my Dad. Soon, my Dad showed up in his white GMC.
“So, the car isn’t working?” he asked impatiently. He was annoyed because due to his profession, (doctoring) he couldn’t go with us. We assented and kept clear of him. Opa and my dad used jumper cables and other such devices to attempt to recharge the car battery. Nothing availed, though. In the end, the amateur technicians decided the best place for the car was in the auto shop. A tow truck came and pulled it away. Patrick and I stood with Oma, disappointed, watching the car and truck fade slowly into the distance.
I wondered if our trip, due to this conflict, was aborted, but did not ask aloud. We went in the house and had Spaghetti Os for lunch. Afterwards, we watched the last half of Notorious. The afternoon went ticking by. Hours we should have spent in travel were wasted moping at home.
At two in the afternoon, Opa came back again with a surprise. He had brought a rental car so that we could still go on our trip! Everything had already been transferred from the broken car to the loaner, so all we needed to do was get in the latter and go. And that’s what we did.
Our trip was really a blast. Every day we went horseback riding and swimming. White and purple lilacs bloomed everywhere, spreading a layer of sweet-scented snow on the grassy soil. I even learned how to play shuffleboard. Nevertheless, what I remember most about this trip was how much of a hassle it was to get there.
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A Special Day
The spaceship was speeding ahead with all of its might. As it neared the planet, it narrowly escaped being dashed to pieces by an ungainly asteroid. The enemy was coming up ever closer to the vehicle’s starboard side. The prestigious passenger looked desperately to the pilot. “Can’t this thing go any faster?” he demanded. With a suave grin, the pilot nodded and pushed a lever. The ship twirled forward in full thrust. Now behind them, the Imperials mirrored their motion and sped ahead. A few laser-gun hits, and the pursued ship exploded, pieces of it falling into oblivion. A red phrase appeared on the screen of the TV. “Game Over!” stated the throaty voice of Darth Vader.
“Natalie! Why did you bump into me? You made me lose the game!” My ten-year-old brother Patrick had been playing a Nintendo Gamecube Star Wars game. Now he looked at me with animosity.
“Sorry!” I protested, edging out of the room.
“But you made me lose! I almost won it, and--”
I interrupted. “Patrick, It’s just a game. It’s not the end of the world.” How many times had I used this argument this week alone? Three times, four times…
“It took me a week to get to this level. Now I have to start all over!” He was in an irate mood.
“Look,” I said, desperately looking for a way to escape, “Why don’t you go yell at Teddy? I have to get ready to go.”
“Go where?”
“Remember? Oma and Opa are taking us to Rankin Ranch.” I looked at Patrick. He was clothed in nothing but pajamas, and it was noon. “You don’t look very ready yourself.” I said disgustedly. “They’ll be here any minute, and you haven’t even gotten dressed yet!”
“That’s today?” He was surprised and had evidently forgotten.
“Yeah, ask Mom.”
“Rats; I need to pack!” He was up and off the couch in a second and dashing down the hallway. I sighed and picked up my duffel bag. Did I have everything? Toothbrush, toothpaste, pajamas, hairbrush, shampoo…In the midst of my accounting, the telephone rang. With a spring, I was at it. I picked up the receiver.
“Hello?”
“Hi Natalie, this is Oma.” (Oma is what we called my mother’s mom; Opa is what we called my mother’s dad)
“Hi Oma. Are you almost here?”
“We’ll be there in half an hour or so. Is everyone ready?”
“Yeah, pretty much,” I said, hearing Patrick yelling from his room, “Mom, where did you put my socks?”
“Ok Natalie, remember that you need clothes for the whole weekend” Oma reminded me.
“Of course. See you later.”
“Bye.”
“Bye.”
I slammed the phone down and yelled, “Pat, you have to have enough things to last till Sunday!”
He replied, in a whining voice, “I know!”
I answered back to him, “Just making sure.”
Half an hour passed slowly. I was so excited to leave for the dude ranch in the High Sierras! Eventually, a horn honk sounded outside. Pat and I raced to the door and over to my grandparents’ car. We tossed our duffel bags in the trunk and got in.
Oma arrested us in our motion. “Wait; I want to go see Mommy first.” (she called my mom ‘Mommy’ because she was our mommy.) We waited patiently for ten minutes. She came back and got in again. Opa, who had turned the engine off for the ten minutes, tried to rev it up again. It would not start.
Opa used his cell phone to call my Dad. Soon, my Dad showed up in his white GMC.
“So, the car isn’t working?” he asked impatiently. He was annoyed because due to his profession, (doctoring) he couldn’t go with us. We assented and kept clear of him. Opa and my dad used jumper cables and other such devices to attempt to recharge the car battery. Nothing availed, though. In the end, the amateur technicians decided the best place for the car was in the auto shop. A tow truck came and pulled it away. Patrick and I stood with Oma, disappointed, watching the car and truck fade slowly into the distance.
I wondered if our trip, due to this conflict, was aborted, but did not ask aloud. We went in the house and had Spaghetti Os for lunch. Afterwards, we watched the last half of Notorious. The afternoon went ticking by. Hours we should have spent in travel were wasted moping at home.
At two in the afternoon, Opa came back again with a surprise. He had brought a rental car so that we could still go on our trip! Everything had already been transferred from the broken car to the loaner, so all we needed to do was get in the latter and go. And that’s what we did.
Our trip was really a blast. Every day we went horseback riding and swimming. White and purple lilacs bloomed everywhere, spreading a layer of sweet-scented snow on the grassy soil. I even learned how to play shuffleboard. Nevertheless, what I remember most about this trip was how much of a hassle it was to get there.
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